I chose "Hurray" because my birthday is tomorrow [my birthday is 3rd of May] And I thought of having a fun one and a lively one!!! Also i was inspired by Shel Silverstein.
Hurray
"Hurray" I say with joy in my heart and soul.
"Hurray" I say with a jump and a leap.
"Hurray" I say with a toy kangaroo in my hand and a pizza slice in the other.
"Hurray" I say running down and up the curly stairs with a pencil in one hand and a jacket in the other what I need to bring down stairs today.
"Goodnight" I say with a pillow and a cuddly toy and I head to my moms and dads room.
"My birthday is tomorrow"I say z
z
z
"Hurray" I say
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With a cuddly toy and me in the middle dad on the left mom on the right.
"HURRAY" We all say !!!!
I love how you used repetition when saying "Hurray"to emphasize how you felt
ReplyDeleteEarly best wishes for a very happy birthday Joley. You must be z z z by now :-) great poem.
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem!
ReplyDelete- Oskar
I love it too! I think the way you put all the z's going down the page is very creative.
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