Saturday, May 4, 2013

Poetry Month: Day Four (by Daniel)

I chose "Bathroom" because I really like this poem. I like sharing this poem and having other people see it! I hope you enjoy it!

Bathroom
Uh-Oh! Uh-Oh! Got to go!
Katie Clements says no!
It's slowly dripping down my pants!
It feels like a bunch of crawling ants!

Sweat is dripping down my face!
I really don't want to be in this case!
Oh-My-Gosh! Katie says yes!
I can't believe I'm out of this mess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-by Daniel
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4 comments:

  1. Katie CMay 4, 2013 at 9:11 AM

    Daniel,

    You were able to create a poem where the rhyming really works and adds to the poem. It has such a clear rhythm. Thanks for sharing!

    Your teacher,
    Katie

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  2. AnonymousMay 16, 2013 at 5:33 PM

    I like how you put a lot of details in your poem like "It feels like a bunch of crawling ants!"

    :D
    - David A.










    :D
    -David A.

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  3. UnknownMay 20, 2013 at 3:26 PM

    I love the nice rhythm in it!
    -Nicole

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  4. UnknownMay 20, 2013 at 3:27 PM

    I love the nice rhythm in it! :)
    -Nicole

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