I chose "Excited" because it's my sister's birthday and she said I should, also this is one of my favorites.
Excited
Were in this line,
feels so l o n g,
watching the fast passers zing right past us.
My legs feel waited.
Brooke is tired.
"Finally!" We say.
We come to the ride.
We hop in the car, one by one.
Were "shaking",
Were excited.
3...2...1...
BLAST!!!!!!
And were in the tunnel,
lights all different colors,
Rasberry red,
lemon yellow,
lime green,
blueberry blue,
mandarin orange,
grape purple.
The ride stops.
Awesome,we say.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-by Aidan M.
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