Bubbles
pic,pic,pic
there I am standing
in a huge
b
u
b
b
l
e
around me
and taking a
pic,pic,pic
the lights went out
the bubbles came
I can just feel the
pressure pounding
on me
to many bubbles
the bubbles were bursting
out with
l
a
u
g
h
t
e
r
bubbles so many
I can't go anywhere
without popping bubbles
I am obsessed with
b
u
b
b
l
e
s
bubbles here
bubbles there
bubbles everywhere
I some times even dream
about bubbles
I love bubbles
-by Isabelle
Isabelle,
ReplyDeleteI love how you used alliteration when you wrote "pressure pounding." Those two p sounds in a row really helped me feel how hard that pressure must have been. Thanks for sharing your poem with us!
Your teacher,
Katie